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The Missed Opportunity

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It was a bright and sunny day. The sun was shining. The birds were singing.
And our beloved Heroes were bound by an effeminate general of the Red Ribbon Army.
By his magically Psychic binding ropes that left Goku and the gang hopping and dropping
upon the floor as the illustrious General Blue sought out the Dragonballs.
What follows is an attempt at correcting a grievous error in judgement from the Gay man with a distinct fear of Jerry like mice.

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The sounds of destruction rought throughout the otherwise peaceful small island dwelling known as Kame House. Inside the figures out of heroes Goku, Bulma, Krillin, Master Roshi and the rest. Sat bound by the infused Ki of the pretty boy of the Red Ribbon General Blue.
In search of the Dragonballs he sought after following their heroing escape from the pirate cave. 

"Where are those Dragonballs!?" Blue Shouted for what seemed to be the 100th time as he combed through the deceptively large house while the gang sat. Struggling to get free.

"Oof Ughh! Come on Goku, Master Roshi. Surely you two can break these ropes." Yelled a scared and annoyed Bulma as they continued their fruitless struggle. "Grr rah! huff huff.. Sorry Bulma. Not even the strength of the mighty turtle hermit could break these dag blastit ropes!" Roshi likewise chimed in on his attempt.

"Well maybe if you trained instead of reading dirty magazines all the time. You would be strong enough to free us!" Turtle quipped to his now angry master.

Goku's hungry stomach however growled throughout the house quelling any further arguing. "I'm so hungry. I don't have any strength left.." He muttered childishly as his tail moved about in starvation.

The angry general chose this moment to storm in having gone through the house with no sign of the balls. "Alright you brats! Where are you hiding those Dragonballs!? 
Someone starts talking or everyone dies!" He declared in fury as Bulma thought to try and flirt her way out of danger.

"Oh come on. What do you need with Dragonballs when you could have me.?" She said with as much sexiness she could muster in her predicament. Only to meet with recoil.

"Eww you ugly harlet. I want nothing to do with the likes of you!" He added with a scoff.
"Listen here you pompous jerk. I'll have you know i am rich and beautiful and itellegent and mod-ehehe-mode-hehest gah damnit Goku will you keep your tail away from my feet!?" Bulma screamed as Goku's furry tail brushed against her smooth foot as he lay there in hunger. Too weak to even reply.

This moment sparked a creative bulb above the head of prissy sailor as he approached Bulma. "Ohoho how interesting. I may have a use for you yet. Ticklish are you?" He asked with a snark laughing behind his hand. Bulma could only blanch and screw her resolve while trying to look confident.
"What no ofcourse not. I just thought it was a spider or something crawling me. hahaha"
She tittered out with outward confidence.

"Oh is that so?" He asked with marked amusement. Then you won't mind if i do this while asking where the Dragonballs are." Reaching he plucks a feather from a nearby pillow and waves it about. "I'll just use this since i don't feel like touching your dirty feet." He scoffed as he began to lightly stroke the feather along Bulma's smooth soft soles.

Her foot began to flex from the ticklish kiss of the feather. But she screwed her mouth shut so as not to give any sign of reacting. ' Come on Bulma. You are strong. You can't let this pretty boy get the best of you with some stupid tickling. ...But damnit it really tickles!'

Blue became more amused watching Bulma's feet move in tandem to escape the feather.
"You know i think either you must be ticklish or your feet just like to dance." Blue mused as he swept the feather up and down her soles. Paying special attention to the silky skin of Bulma's arches as her bound her bounced even more and a tight grin formed on her lips. "What was that? Did you want to say something?"

"Mmmm... no..this doesn't boahah..ther me at all you creep!" Bulma managed to strain out with a growl as he continued his torturous tickling of her sadly all too ticklish tootsies.

"You keep saying that yet i can see in your eyes. You won't be able to hold out much longer. hoohohohoh" He chuckled as only he could. Now bringing the feather up along her toes. Brushing under them as they instinctively curled around the feather trying to hold it.
Bulma began sweating and the strain clear on her face the more he tormented her. Her eyes widening at one came next.
"Oh those naughty toes have my feather. That will never do. Time for a second feather to fix that." He said in a sing song voice. as he brushed it along her soles making her toes unclamp and spasm as Bulma could no long hold on.

"Ghehe...hehehhahaha stop stop gyahahaha leave my toes aloohohone!" Bulma giggled out as her ticklish secret was finally exposed. "Oh ho we have a liar in our midst. Liars must be punished." He said with a evil edge as he teased the toes of one foot under while sawing the feather through the second. Paying special attention to her big toes.

"NOHOHOHHO DON'T TIHIHICKLE MY FEET. THEY ARE SOHOHOHOHO TICKLISH PEAHEHEHEEESE!" Bulma begged as her feet bounced and bucked to escape the evil kiss of his dual feather assault. But as the feathers kept getting caught. he scoffed in annoyance. "You are making this hard. Time to deal with those toes." He manipulated some of the rope to untwine and send small strands to tie her big toes.

"There now. So much better. Tied up pretty with a little bow." Blue uttered with amusement at her predicament as he went back to sawing between her toes and lightly teasing her arches. Tears sprang to Bulma's eyes at his torment of her feet.
OH GOD PLEASE STOP TICKLE ME EHEAHAHAHA" Shaking her head from side to side she fought to get away but could barely move at his cruel torture.

"STOHOHAHAHP I CAN'T STAAHAHND IT YEHAHAHA LEAVE MY TOHHOHOES ALONE YOU JERK!!" Bulma was becoming breathless from his torment. Though only a few minutes had passed. She knew her limit was near.
"If this isn't doing it for you. I suppose i'll have to see what your belly has to say instead."
He added as he moved one father to tease her navel making her wiggle and bounce in agony as the other continued to work her toes.

"NONONONONOONOOOOO I GIVEHAHAHAHAHA I'LL TALK I'LL HAHHAHAHAEHAHHA"
At her admission he slacked off letting her breathe. " ahahaha i'll tell you .huff ohhoho god my stomach hurts.. they are..-" Before she could finish. a shot rang out as Blue suddenly collapsed dead. a bullet hole in his skull as Launch jumped in through the window with her smoking gun in hand. "Heh heh heh. Like i'd let some schlub like you ever pull off a job like this." Launch said with a defining smirk as a chorus of yells rang out for her name.

"Oh Launch thank Kami you are here. That guy was gonna kill us and take the Dragonballs.
Could you please cut us loose.. hey what are you doing?" Bulma asked as Launch picked up the discarded feathers. "So what was it you were saying about where the Dragonballs are?" She said with a threatening glare at Bulma.

"What do you think you are doing Launch. Come on you can't be. hehahahahha nohohoho not this again! GYEAHAHA GET THAT OUT OF MY BELLYBUTTON DAMNIT! HEHAHAHHA GOKUUUU HAHAHAEHA"

The next couple of hours would be followed by Bulma's laugher, Roshi nose bleeding, Goku snoring away from lack of food and Turtle doing his best to get a feather to stop Launch..
It's short. It's not very good. But it was driving me nuts the urge to write something. So i decided to fix a scene from one of the most easily set up tickle interrogation scenes in the history of anime.
That prissy General Blue had Bulma dead to rights, Barefoot and in her underwear. Feet wiggling and ready and yet went to find the Dragonballs the boring way. So i hope someone likes this.
I'm sure my next story will be must better. But for now enjoy.. or not.

Bulma Goku and everyone is owned by Akira Toriyama.
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TickleWizard's avatar
Perfect choice of screen cap! The sheer terror of knowing your most ticklish spot is on show!