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Belly Blows and Ticklish Toes

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It was a quiet sunny morning in the hills of Mount Paozu. Chichi stood over her stove humming happily as she prepared a "small" breakfast for her two boys.
The flora and fauna seemed to hum right along with her. Until an unsettling roar echoed through the mountainside that caused a sense of panic in every creature for miles around.
The rumbling stomachs of two hungry half breed saiyans awakening from their slumber!

The two boys were quick to race each other to the table as they were still famished from their daily grind. Training for the big Tenkaichi Budokai. The elder of the two boys Gohan was the first to make it to the table. After planting a warm kiss on the cheek of his overbearing but loving mother Chichi.
"Morning mom! Wow this looks great!" He was quick to sit and tuck a napkin in his shirt as he began to devour the mass quantities of food before him. His name certainly not shying from his voracious appetite. However an indignant yell and scowl from his otherwise chirpy little brother Goten dampened his breakfast. Albeit slightly.
"Hey! That's not fair big brother. You shoved past me so you could eat first!" Goten whined while looking at his mother. Who merely shook her head happily at the antics of her two boys as she sat away from the "kill zone" That is her son's eating space. Enjoying her modest plate of food she had learned to set aside.

"Sorry little brother, but i can't afford to waste any time. I have a lot of training to do in a short time if i'm gonna get myself back into fighting shape. especially if dad is going to be there." He said with a big smile as he could not wait to see his father again after 7 long years. Goten however could no longer hear his brother as he too dove into the mountain of food awaiting his grumbling stomach. Eating away and smiling unknowingly in a manner like that of his deceased father. Bringing a happy sigh from his mother.

"Oh i just can't believe i'll get to see Goku again after so long. I really need to get my hair done and get everything done up for his arrival. Though knowing your father, he won't notice and will probably as me what's for lunch." She spoke with an amused glare. Knowing the habits of beloved husband all too well.
"So Gohan" Chichi added suddenly, wanting to change the subject. "Is your girlfriend Videl coming to train again today?" She asked slyly as he continued to eat only to sputter and blush at her words.

"MOM geez! Videl is just a friend. We've been over this. And yes she is coming to train. I promised to teach her to fly and she still needs a few more lessons to work it out."
Gohan said with exacerbation. As he began to resume his food.
"Well i just thought i'd warn you. Bulma needs to get some work done on the GR since Vegeta went and broke it again. So she asked that we babysit Trunks for the day. So he will likely be joining in on your training." Chichi added much to Gohan's chagrin and Goten's delight.

"Yay Trunks is coming! We can play battle tag and blow up the mountain!" Goten proclaimed happily as Gohan looked on in horror. "Mom you can't be serious? It's bad enough trying to explain away Goten's growth to Videl. Having Trunks around will be nearly impossible!" He said in panic as Chichi simply shrugged him off.

"Yes well Bulma said you do owe her one for making you that silly super hero watch of yours. So take it up with her." She spoke quickly ending the conversation as she began to work on the dishes. Gohan stood there jaw dropped as Goten continued to cheer excitedly and charge out the door waiting for Trunks. " Oh great.. what else could possibly go wrong today!" Gohan cried out to the heavens.
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Up in other world Goku sneezed from his place meditating on the mountain as a super saiyan. The force of which blew down knocking over several other fighters and Ruining King Kai's attempt to beat West Kai at a game of checkers.
"Heh heh. someone must be talking about me." He said sheepishly while rubbing his nose.
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Out in the open plains behind their modest home. Goten steady flew in circles. Waiting anxiously for his best friend Trunks to arrive as Gohan took his stance and began working through his warm up exercises before Videl was sure to arrive.
With a grunt he began to dash around smashing rocks systematically and finishing his routine with a large Kamehameha into the sky. His action however was not unnoticed as Videl came flying around the bend. Narrowly avoiding the beam of destruction.

Landing quickly she dashed out in panic as Gohan was quick to stiffen up before she got a good look at him. Gohan what in the world was that beam of light!? It almost hit my jet copter!" She yelled in accusation. Firmly believing he was behind it as he sheepishly rubbed his neck nervously. " Uhm well that is. Ah hey let's begin your next flying lesson right!?" He said desperately. Hoping to deter her questions.
"Ah right, let's get to it! I won't stop until i am faster than you!" She declared confidently pumping her fist. "Alright let's start from the basics and see how far you have come." He said with a smile as she was quick to follow.

"Okay start by building your Ki from the pit of your stomach. then let it flow out to every part of you. Focus it under you and let it hold you up. " He instructed with a serious tone as she did so in a matter of seconds and began to float. "See? No problem. I've got this down pat. Watch this!" Videl began to fly slowly upward before gaining speed and making loops like she had seen Goten do the other day. Gohan smiled up at her. amazed at her progress. But the happy times came to an end when an overzealous Trunks flew in too quickly and nearly crashed into Videl making her lose her concentration as she plummeted to the ground.
"AHHHHHH Help i'm going to die!!!" Videl screamed in terror as she headed to the ground at an alarming rate. Her screaming continued as she hit a firm but warm structure and stopped to look as Gohan looked down on her in worry. "Videl are you alright?" He asked in concern as she looked up at him dazed. "Yeah.. you saved me.." She said softly with a small smile. But a blaring voice echoed from above as Trunks looked down on them.

"Eww Gohan. Save the kissy face stuff for when kids aren't around huh?" He said with a huff as Goten flew over to Trunks' side. "Wow so Videl really is gonna be my new sister!" Goten declared while dancing a jig in the sky. The would be couple quickly realized their position and seperated quickly. Both blushing furiously as Videl brushed off her clothing.
"Hmph can we get back to the lesson already!?" She said with a blushing scorn as she stomped back their designated training area while Gohan quickly ran after her.

Back with Goten and Trunks. Goten was jumping around excitedly as Trunks seemed to quietly fume. "So what do you want to play Trunks? Battle tag? Blow up the king of the mountain?" Goten said excitedly as Trunks suddenly lost it. " Will you knock it off Goten!? Don't you see we have a serious situation here? This is no time for kid stuff!" He said firmly as he scowled and crossed his arms. Getting Goten to stop and look at him with worry. "What is it Trunks? Bad guys?" He asked curiously.
"No you idiot. I'm talking about that!" He pointed dramaticly to where Gohan and Videl were training. Rather closely infact. " That girl is trying to steal Gohan away. We have to do something or we'll lose him forever!" Trunks declared with  rightious fury as Goten gasped in shock.

"Videl is gonna try to take my big brother away!? Grr i thought she was nice. But she is really a villain in disguise. What do we do Trunks?" He defered to the brains of their duo.
"Well obviously we can't hurt her. She has already brainwashed Gohan with her girly ways. That would only make him mad. We just have to drive her away in order to save him." He said with a nod as Goten stood at his side confidently. "Yeah!... so how do we do that." He asked with a confused happy grin as Trunks fell down in shock. only to get up and get him into a headlock.

"How do you think were gonna do it? Were gonna give her tactic 83." He spoke with a sinister grin. "But Trunks how will dying all her clothes pink do any good? She's already a girl." Goten added sagely as Trunks pulled his hair. "Ah damnit your right! Besides dad almost killed us when we did that to him. There has to be something... Goten.. hey Goten!" He called out noticing he was no longer there. instead playing with a baby dinosaur. As it playfully wrestled and licked him nuzzling his stomach. " Hehehe stop it Chobi! That tickles ahahaha" Goten squealed cutely as Trunks began to rub his hands together. " I think i have a plan heh heh heh"
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As Videl and Gohan continued their lesson in Ki control Goten came running up franticly.
Gohan! Mr. Piccolo just called and said you have ta come to the look out right away. It's an emergency!" He said waving his arms as Gohan looked at him in shock. "What? Piccolo did? I'm Sorry Videl. This is important. I'll be back as soon as i can." Gohan said swiftly as he took off at high speed for the lookout. Though in the back of his mind he idly wondered. 'Since when does Piccolo use a phone..?"
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Back with Videl and Goten. She stared at him accusingly. Having much more experience in spotting a liar than Gohan. She walked over to him. "What exactly are you up to Goten? I don't know who this Piccolo person is. But i can spot a liar a mile away. What are you up to?" She said as she got nose to nose with him. She wasn't prepared for Trunks to come running up behind her and throw her shirt over her head. "Ahh what are you two doing!?"
She yelled in panic as she suddenly felt something soft and moist press against her exposed stomach. Followed by a loud reverberating sound.
"Ahhhhahahaha Gah don't do that! It tickles ehehehahaha" Videl squealed out as Goten's lips gave her a couple of good zerberts as she fought to break free. But unable to break the hold of the much strong demi saiyans.

"That's it Goten. You got her. Give her another!" Trunks said excitedly as Goten blew another round on her toned but deathly ticklish tummy. "AHAHAHAHAHA STOP THAT YOU BRATS EHEHEAHA I hate friggin zerberts!" She yelled angrily through her laughter and managed to reverse headbutt Trunks. Though not hurting him it did startle him enough for her to pull away as she made a break for it. "Damnit Goten you let her get away!" Trunks quickly shifted the blame to his more naive partner in crime as he scratched his head. " Sorry Trunks. I didn't mean to..." He said sadly as Trunks shook him. "Quit whining. we gotta catch her quick!" He said as he gave chase.
Videl was quick to take to the trees. Hoping they would provide cover. But this was The boy's favorite play ground. They quickly gave chase. Dashing around the trees and making spooky noises.

"You two better knock it off right now. This isn't funny!" Videl yelled out to the voices. Hoping to gain some authority over them. Only to be met by laughter.
"You can't escape us ooooooooooh" Trunks said in a deep menacing voice as Goten tried to help. " Were going to eat all of your dinner eeeeeeeeh" " Goten you dummy. That would only scare you!" Trunks shouted out as they started arguing. 

Videl was able to take advantage of this and tried to grab Trunks. Not realizing yet his real strength he laughed and quickly picked her up by her ankle holding her in the air.
"Seems someone hasn't learned the game yet Goten. Fire round 2!" He declared while yanking off her shoe and sock taking a moment to sniff her sock. "Eww i thought girls were supposed to smell good." Trunks said while holding his nose. Getting an indignant blush from Videl. Which quickly turned to yelling as Goten approached. 

"Videly welly I'm gonna get your belly" Goten said in a singsong manner as he quickly wrapped his arms around her and blew another large zerbert as Trunks began scratching his short nails on her sole. Making her sway as she laughed hard.
"GYAHAHAHA I'M GONNA KIIIIHEHEHALL YOU BRATS EHEHEHAHAHAEHEA STOP TICKLING MY TOES!! GYAAAHAHHA NOT THE BELLY BUTTON!!!" she screamed out as Goten blew a loud wet one right on her navel while Trunks amused himself wiggling a single finger between her big toes.

"Wow you have some big feet for a girl. Even more ticklish than my mom's too!" He said in half amazement and half amusement recalling a similar game he had played with her.
"Yeah but her belly is even more ticklish than Mommy's too." Goten declared with equal merryment as he continued to blow on her belly and work his little fingers into her sides as Videl twisted and wiggled helplessly to escape her tormentors. 

Videl's shaking and laughter almost doubled however when Trunks began working his nails along her surprisingly smooth arches. "NOO NO NOOOOO EHEHHAHAHAHAHA NOT THERE PLEASE NOAHAHHAAT THERE!! IT TICKLES SOOHOHOHOH BAAADDD!" Videl screamed out as tears began to fall to the ground from her ticklish trouble.
"We've almost got her Goten! Go for the kill!" He said with an evil gleam as Goten nodded simply and stuck his finger directly into her belly button and twisted.
The following scream echoed for miles. Far more terrifiying than the hungry growls of saiyan tummies.

"AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NOOO MORE HEHEHAHAHAHAHA I'M GONNNA DIIHIHIHIHIHHIE
HEHEHEHEAHAHAHAHAHA MY POOHOHOT BELLLY!!!" The sweating figure of Videl almost hung limp as Trunks set her panting form down and Goten poked at her. "Uhm Trunks do you think we went to far?" Goten asked fearfully. "Nah everything is fine Goten. You worry too much." Trunks said in turn but without much confidence.

"So this is what you two were up to?" The deathly calm voice that is Gohan said as he hung overhead glaring down at the two of them as they gulped. Floating down he went to Videl's side to check on her. " Videl are you okay?" He asked as he looked her over carefully. " *pant pant* Yeah.. i'm okay..Gohan.." She said slowly as she tried to catch her breath and Gohan carried her to the stream for water as Gohan gave them one last glare as he passed.

"Trunks do you think we should get outta here?" Goten asked in a whispered panic. 
"Uhh yeah Let's go to my house. Dad'll keep him busy if he chases us cause his GR broke and he has no one to train with. Come on!" As they took off Goten pondered as his stomach growled. " Hey Trunks. Do you think your mommy will make lunch for us? "
" Yeah course she will Goten. If not we can always persuade her" He said with an evil smirk and flexed his fingers.
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What sort of evil tickle monster has been created on our world? Find out next time on Dragon Ball Z!
Well here we have another DBZ story. This time based on one of my favorite comics featuring one of my favorite tomboys. Videl.
The idea struck me and it came out. The tickling is admittedly a tad short. But i think the story is humourous and came out well. There may be some typos. It is late and i am too tired to check right now so bare with it. I'll correct it later.
The image in question belongs to :iconkoochiekoochietoons:
To you sir i apologize for not asking to use your image for my story. The ideas come so quickly i never have time to ask. If it is a problem. please let me know and i'll remove it.
That said i hope everyone likes it.
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Do you have any stories of Chichi being tickled?